100 Word Challenge 5


Link to Prompt: https://100wc.net/week-28-19/


As I opened my eyes and looked at the world around me I felt like a needle in a hay stack I was the only one what seemed like a mile around that had any color on. I’d been sent to this country on mission to find any places where humans could possibly live. The land was interesting it looked as if humans had been there but had either left or died off there where pieces of wood, coconuts and dried out leaves. I had a connection to this island but I don’t know why.

100 Word Challenge 3


Link to Prompt: https://100wc.net/week-23-19/


The wind blew and I looked out my window to close it and I noticed the paint work that needed doing. I went out and lent the  ladder up against the brick crumbling wall I begun stepping up and then suddenly I fell back on to the pavement my body screamed with pain. My eyes watered as I slowly got up and walked to get help I felt as if I was sinking as I continued to walk I trembled and stumbled  as my gold coins fell out of my pocket the wind blew my red hair into my face.

100 Word Challenge 1 (Edited)

Prompt: … it was completely out of tune…

Link To Prompt: https://100wc.net/week-20-19/


As I peeked through the door I saw my sister’s pink room and that she was fiddling with and old dusty radio in the corner of her room. As she flicked it on it screeched and the music came on in a high pitch it was completely out of tune. She pressed a few more buttons and the volume lowed and the tune increased. She begun dancing her pink dress flaring out as she twilled. I slowly closed the door and walked up the stairs feeling for bad spying on her yet surprised by the amount of talent she had.

100 Word Challenge 2


Link to Prompt: https://100wc.net/week-21-5/


As a screaming child’s voice echoed though the train station a fluted mother was pushing the pram caring her young baby girl. The mother crouched down to comfort her screaming child her bags falling off her shoulders on to the concrete floor. Slowly the young girl stopped screaming and the noise of the train station came back. The child’s eyes fluttered closed as she fell asleep her body went limp. Her arms fell out of the pram as she dropped her white fluffy teddy bear on to the concrete and the mother and daughter walked on without noticing the bear.

100 Word Challenge 2019 1

Prompt: … it was completely out of tune…

Link To Prompt: https://100wc.net/week-20-19/


As I peeked through the door I saw my sister’s room pink and that she was fiddling with and old dusty radio in the corner of her room as she flicked it on it screeched and the music came on in a high tone it was completely out of tune she pressed a few more buttons and a song comes on. She be begins dancing her pink dress flaring out as she twilled. I slowly closed the door and slowly walked up the stairs feel in bad spying on her sister and surprised by the amount of talent she had.

School Captain Speech

Hello 5/6’s,

My name is Amelia I have been going to Moonee Ponds Primary School since prep. I have done many enjoyable and memorial things while I have been at this school.  I have been in S.R.C in years 2, 3 and 5 and green team in year 4 and have participated in tournament of minds last year. I also have been playing flute for nearly 3 years. Outside of school I play netball in a team twice a week as well as ballet and squad swimming. One of my favourite things which I am quite passionate about is Harry Potter and Fantastic Beasts harry potter has taught me many things and values and lesson which I now use in my everyday life. And I would like to be your 2019 school captain.

As part of school captain you have to be an organised person which I think is in my 2nd nature. I try my best to complete and finish things on time while still being neat and not rushing what I am doing. During my time as a year 5/6 this year I have tried my best to be as organised as I can I have completed more than I ever thought I am always on time both at the start of the day and after recess and lunch complete all of my homework on time as well as doing extra optional homework I do this to the best of my abilities. Being school captain would mean I am organised getting to meetings on time and handing on things as well as working and handing when it was the right time if I was school captain this would mean it would help you to run more smoothly because I have done what I need to do.

While I have been in 5/6 I have improved my communication skills to different ages not only though class masters to improve my public speaking but also though S.R.C and buddies I have been able to talk to kids both older and younger than me and be a role model to them. This has helped me both in and out of school I have been able to communicate better with my buddy which has led her to become more confident around me communication can not only be used in this sense but also being a good listener as well as being clear and not over complicating things as well as respecting for them. Witch it think that I have gradually become better at. This has also lead me to become a better public speaker, I am naturally not a very loud person but though the course of this year and last year my public speaking has improved for the best I am still not the best public speaker but though things like performing music, and lines I am now less shaky and more confident when talking and acting around large groups of people.

I feel as I am an open minded person and am open to stepping out of my comfort zone and being optimistic about them and being open to try and do and listen to new ideas. I have done this though many ways throughout my years at this school as well as I have read many books and tried many sports and I will never say no to trying or doing anything again, as I have been open to doing many things. When being school captain you have to listen to everyone’s ideas even If you don’t personally agree with them yourself. You also have to listen and consider others idea’s sometimes even over your own but you may not always get your way every time this will help you known to others by being open and fair.

School captain would open up a lot of new opportunities for me it would help me enforce the school values Respect optimism care and collaboration  to all students as well as opening up new learning experiences for me to improve further on my public speaking skills so I can be the best that I can. School captain would allow me to improve on many skills I already have as well as helping and communicating to others. If I was your school captain you would have more input in what I do and this would help you to be more positive about our school therefore improving what I can based on what you want.  And that is why I would like to be you’re 2019 school captain. And I would really value and love to represent you as school captain next year.



Harry Potter 5 Book Review

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

J.K Rowling

Published on the 21st of June 2003

Published by Bloomsbury


This sequel of harry potter a kid’s fantasy and mystery is mainly about the order of the phoenix or Dumbledore’s army fighting against you know who as the second wizarding war breaks out  and to protect the younger generations. It also follows the story as the ministry interferes at Hogwarts and Professor Dolores Unbridge inspects the school. And how harry is despised at school because of last year’s events. As well as you know who reaching his full power and harry and him fighting for the safe of the prophecy.

The three main characters are Harry James Potter, Hermione Jean Granger and Ron Bilius Weasly who the book follows and the secondary characters Ginny, Nellie, Luna Fred and Gorge. As well as professors Umbridge McGonagall Dumbledore and Snape.

I give this book a 5 out of 5 stars because of the wonderful use of the heroes journey a popular writing technique. It is also well written by using different scenes very well throughout the book to make it even more interesting for the reader as well as using descriptive words to enchant the reader in to their wonderful universe.

I would recommend this book/series to children above the age of 7 because some of the scenes can be a bit brutal at sometimes. I would also recommend this book to anyone who has read the rest of the series or loves to read fantasy and mystery novels and books instead of realistic fiction or informative.

District Cross Country Reflection

                                      District Cross Country


Today I took part in the district cross country and came 38th out of 49 girls participating in the 3 km run. I am very proud of myself and the achievements I’ve had from this year to last year. I’m also very happy about my efforts since the track had steep hills and sharp turns, and also because I wasn’t going to go in the first place. Also because i was racing against year sixes. i’m just very proud of the effort since I don’t train and i’m ecstatic for just finishing and giving it a go!



                                                        A New World

Written by Amelia May 2018


The icy breeze blew thought the meadow. This winter was the coldest winter the            meadow had ever faced icicles formed on all of the remaining leaves and all the              animals where nowhere to be seen. On early frosty morning a young girl walked        through the meadow she had strawberry blonde hair and bright blue eyes she looked as if she was walking through the meadow to get rid of stress or something was bothering her. Suddenly the young girl burst in to tears and collapsed in the meadow crying her heart out.

A small mouse crawled out from the hollow tree trunk where took shelter from the cold and ran up to the girl making small prints in the thick snow that covered the meadow. The girl screamed at the sight of the mouse and stood up her knees covered in snow the mouse squeaked at her as if it was to say “it’s ok I’m not going to hurt you.” The girl put her hand out and to her surprise the mouse licked her finger the girl sat in the snow to stroke the mouse.

No more than 5 minutes later a young boy dashed in to the meadow he looked the same age as the girl with the same strawberry blonde hair and bright blue eyes as her as well. He ran up to her stop her. “Why are you out here at the hour,” he yelled at her this only made the girl cry more. “Leave me alone,” she called back and turned away to go back to patting the mouse. “No” he replied “me and mum have been worried sick about you we thought you were kidnaped or something along those lines. “The boy seemed very distressed behind his angry face “Well firstly its mum and I and secondly I don’t want to come home this is all too stressful for me I really miss dad. I  don’t really want to come home I hate having this feeling like somethings missing it’s all too much.” “Well you’re not the only one but we can’t sit here all day crying about it nothing’s going to happen unless we make an effort and no matter how much we think we’ll lose him you and I know that he will always have a place in our hearts.”

A tear ran down the young girl’s cheek it was clear that the words had really struck her. They stood there in silence for what seemed like forever until the girl finally said “thanks that’s exactly what I needed.” The girl slowly stood up her knees covered in snow until this moment you would not have had noticed that her face was as pale as the snow and her lips slowly became blue. The girl hugged the boy and they began to walk out of the meadow the girl took one last glance before following the boys fast pace.

They knew that their lives would be different after they lost their dad but they had no idea of the magical adventures that where coming for them.

The Land Of Stories Beyond The Kingdoms Book Review

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Title: The Land Of Stories Beyond The Kingdoms (4)

Author: Chris Colfer

This book is about twins Alex and Conner who live in the fairy tale world. The twins travel though other classic tales with their friend Goldilocks, Jack, Red and Mother goes to save the fairy tale world from the new greatest villain the masked man who wants the fairy tale world to himself.  I recommend this book to anyone who loves fairy tales or adventure and mystery novels I give this a 5 out of five stars I highly recommend this book.